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Journal - September 20th, 2004 @ 12:40AM

just a little rap i had to write to tell u what i be goin through

family problems? ayo, thats another stack to them shelves/
and wit no one to solve em, thats another cut to myself/
another bonus to my health, with siblings having static/
and this aint the new jersey turnpike, but im seein alotta traffic/
lately, shit got me crazy, im thinking of losing/
abusing my both appearances, and thinking of choosing/
to fall, to stall, to take a step behind/
so i dont have ta be labeled as somethin thats underlined/
REAL BIG PROBLEMS, shit this is really a thirst/
a search, for wahts real, concealing minds for a burst/
and shit got hectic, and im the one to caused it/
and i thought life was perfect? well i guess im tha one who flawed it...



User Comments

HiphopMickeyBreezy
Date: September 20, 2004 @ 12:45 AM
OOOoo, good shit, nice n deep, i like it alot dogg.
HiphopTopDollar
Date: September 20, 2004 @ 10:28 PM
I like the structure and the way you worded it, it flows easily. Have you worked on any new material?
AlternativeJennae
Date: September 24, 2004 @ 12:25 PM
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